How to use internal monologues effectively

There's a quiet, intimate theatre within every character, and as writers, we're lucky enough to have an all-access pass. Internal monologues can be a powerful storytelling device when used effectively. They allow us to venture into a character's deepest thoughts and emotions, giving us a glimpse of their innermost fears, hopes, and dreams.

But as Spiderman's uncle once wisely said, 'With great power comes great responsibility.' The same applies to internal monologues. Use them wisely to add depth and nuance to your characters. Overdo it, and they might end up slowing your narrative – or worse, boring your readers.

Mastering the inner voice

So how do we make the most of this powerful tool? Here are some key tips:

Keep it relevant

Just like with real people, not all of a character's thoughts will be interesting or relevant. Keep your internal monologues focused on the character's current situation, dilemmas, or choices. Let their thoughts inform, intrigue, or surprise the reader.

Balance it out

As with all elements of storytelling, balance is key. Don't let internal monologues dominate your narrative or overshadow your dialogue or action. Find the right mix that suits your story and your style.

Make it personal

Every character's inner voice should be as unique as they are. A 70-year-old professor will think differently from a rebellious teenager. Use internal monologues to showcase your characters' unique voices, perspectives, and personalities.

Use it sparingly

Less is often more when it comes to internal monologues. A well-placed thought or reflection can have a much greater impact than pages of introspection. Remember, you want to show your character's inner world, not drown your readers in it.

Showing vs telling

A common mistake with internal monologues is telling the reader what the character feels rather than showing it. Instead of having your character think, 'I am sad,' show us their sadness through their thoughts, their perceptions, or their memories.

Echoing silences

Silence can be golden, even in an internal monologue. What a character doesn't think or acknowledge can be just as revealing as what they do. Use these echoing silences to add subtext and complexity to your characters.

Deep dives: Self-reflection for writers

Mastering internal monologues isn't just about perfecting a technique. It's about understanding your characters on a deep, intimate level. It's about giving them a voice, a consciousness, a soul. Use inner monologues wisely, use them sparingly, and most importantly, use them authentically.

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