Everything you need to know about the debate of your novel

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In your novel, the debate is that period after the catalyst, but before your protagonist decides to leap into their adventure. During this portion of the narrative, which should encompass around 10% of your word count, your protagonist grapples with the impact of the inciting incident and what it means for their journey ahead. Let's delve into how you can craft this pivotal moment effectively.

The reluctant protagonist

After the inciting incident, your protagonist might initially resist the call to adventure. They might feel overwhelmed, unprepared, or simply unwilling to step outside their comfort zone. This struggle against the inevitable creates tension and allows readers to relate to your protagonist's hesitation.

Impact and introspection

During this phase, it's essential to showcase how the inciting incident impacts your protagonist. Why does it matter to them? How does it challenge or disrupt their daily life? This will help your readers understand why your protagonist must eventually take action.

An internal conflict

This is also an excellent time to deepen your protagonist's internal conflict. How does the inciting incident make them question their beliefs, desires, or understanding of their world? This internal struggle adds another layer of complexity to your protagonist's characterisation.

The weight of consequences

Consequences are often the tipping point that pushes a protagonist into action. Paint a clear picture of what success might look like for your protagonist, and illustrate the potential pitfalls of failure. The stakes should be high enough to compel your protagonist and readers forward.

The shift: plot point one

Something changes just as it seems like your protagonist might forever stay in limbo. This change, often called plot point one, should be a significant moment that makes it intensely personal for your protagonist. It's the straw that breaks the camel's back, making it impossible for your protagonist to ignore the call to adventure any longer.

The helpful mentor

To aid your protagonist in their decision, a mentor might appear. This character could provide your protagonist with the necessary tools, advice, or training to feel prepared to accept the call to adventure.

The central theme

Remember to refresh your reader's memory of the central theme or question of the story. This can help maintain coherence and remind readers of the overarching narrative thread.

Accepting the call

Finally, it's time for your protagonist to accept the call to adventure. They might do so willingly, with newfound determination, or begrudgingly, feeling they have no other choice.

Into the adventure

The debate phase of your novel is a crucial period of introspection and decision-making for your protagonist. It's an opportunity to delve deeper into their character while keeping the narrative tension high. By the end of this section, your readers should be firmly rooted in your protagonist's corner, eager to follow them into the rest of their journey. Happy writing!

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